Talk:Sexuality in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
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2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
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5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Discussion

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

from not necessarily homosexual to plainly homoerotic, or as an idealised heroic friendship. suggest from close but not necessarily homosexual to plainly homoerotic, or as an idealised heroic friendship.
- Done.

Tolkien's background

and educated at boys' grammar schools suggest and educated at male-only grammar schools
- Done.

Shieldmaiden

Jackson does however make Aragorn far more romantic than do either Tolkien or Bakshi must mention how Bakshi directed The Lord of the Rings (1978 film), and link to him.
- Done.

Officer-batman relationship

The relationship that most closely approaches homosexuality suggest The relationship that most closely approaches homosexuality, in the eyes of scholars,
- Added.

@Chiswick Chap: That is all my suggestions, once information regarding Bakshi is added, I will pass the article. Additionally, feel free to revert any of my edits. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:25, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you very much for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:58, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]