Talk:2020 European Masters (2020–21 season)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 17:02, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

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   C. It contains no original research:

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3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

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7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: Didn't find any other issues. Good to go.

Comments

• There are some parts in present tense. Change them to past (" The event is being played between 21 and 27 September 2020")
  • Doing Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
    • Think I've got them all. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• An image in infobox will be better.
  • I'll see what I can do.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
    • I don't think there is an official event poster for the event (there's no fans after all), so I've used the image from the background section
• I will suggest making a different section for broadcast details.
  • It's not really long enough for its own section. I'd agree if there was more to add, such as at the 2019 World Snooker Championship. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
    • I checked the 2020 Masters (snooker) article. It also has a small broadcast section, so I suggested. Personally, I will prefer a different one. ❯❯❯   S A H A
      • Moved regardless. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "There was 98 century breaks made during the tournament" --> "There were".
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "Matches at the event was played as the best-of-9 frames until the semi-finals" --> Matches were
  • DOne Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "...145 made by Mark Allen. Allen also equalled..." - I will suggest using "He" in place of Allen in the 2nd sentence.
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "Cue manufacturer John Parris also offered an new cue to be made as a reward for its return." --> "a new cue".
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "was referreed by Ben Williams." --> "refereed" (spelling mistake).
  • done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "During the first round the World Snooker Tour announced" --> add comma after "round".
  • done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
• "The 2020 European Masters (2) was a professional snooker tournament, and" --> comma not required after "tournament".
  • done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

❯❯❯   S A H A 16:58, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

ArnabSaha - covered the above. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

Lee Vilenski Congrats, the article is now a GA. ❯❯❯   S A H A 08:22, 3 October 2020 (UTC)