Talk:Roar (film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GamerPro64 (talk · contribs) 04:23, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Going to make a claim to review this now and then start the review later. GamerPro64 04:23, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Starting off the review, looking through the images used, File:Roar on set.jpg seems to have incomplete rationales. Needs to be filled in. GamerPro64 04:43, 18 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Replaced with new rationale which has been filled in. NowIsntItTime^{(chats)(doings)} 19:33, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Just noticed I missed File:Roar original soundtrack.jpg so my same issue applies to this image too. GamerPro64 03:28, 25 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done NowIsntItTime^{(chats)(doings)} 20:27, 25 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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So for the entire plot section, checking the word count for the article, it registered exactly 700 words for the section, which is within the standards. But reading it, I believe the section can be parsed down a couple of words. Might need a once over by a copy editor. GamerPro64 00:09, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done. I didn't request for a copy editor, only because you apparently aren't supposed to for an article that's already been submitted as a GAN. I did, however, shorten it significantly by 98 words. -NowIsntItTime^{(chats)(doings)} 04:12, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This took longer than expected. I am promoting this article to Good Article status. I think with a complete copyedit of the article it could stand a chance as a Featured Article. If anyone disagrees with this decision, they can take the article up for Good Article Reassessment. GamerPro64 02:22, 30 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]