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Lorde performed the song on 7 September → The singer also appeared on 7 September
in Los Angeles, California.[15] On 3 October 2013, Lorde held a concert at the Warsaw in Brooklyn and performed the song among other tracks from the album. → in Los Angeles, California,[15] while also singing it a concert at the Warsaw in Brooklyn on 3 October 2013 alongside other material from the album
Lorde performed this song at the Coachella Valley Music Festival → Lorde performed this version at the Coachella Valley Music Festival
and also performed it at Manchester for her → and also used it for a Manchester gig during her
You need to reference her appearance at the Coachella Valley Music Festival and the song's usage on her Melodrama Tour
In the lead you say she performed the song on her debut concert tour, but it is not clear which one it is. Can you specify it here
You need to open the section with something like: Upon its release, "Ribs" received favorable reviews from music critics.
particularly lyrically → I think that this is superfluous, as you say "Lorde had written"; how could she else praise Lorde's writing skills than lyrically?!
Combine both paragraphs
"Ribs" peaked at numbers → Commercially, "Ribs" peaked at numbers
and UK streaming charts respectively → and British streaming charts, respectively
reached number twenty-nine → reached number 29
single also charted on the → single further reached number 26 on the
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! Good luck; Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:09, 2 January 2018 (UTC)