Talk:Reign of Cleopatra/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

1
1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (31.7% is highest, due to phrase similarities)
3a
3.a Y

3.b Y
4
4.a Y
5
5.a Y
6
6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

yet it capsized and he drowned (his body later found nearby in the mud). suggest yet it capsized and he drowned, with his body later being found nearby in the mud.
that he publicly denied fathering him but privately accepted him as a son suggest that he publicly denied fathering him but privately accepted him as his son
Although established earlier, Cleopatra resumed construction at the Dendera Temple complex (near modern Qena, Egypt), suggest Cleopatra resumed construction of the Dendera Temple complex (near modern Qena, Egypt),
@PericlesofAthens: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Sorry for taking so long. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:29, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Pericles' response

@Iazyges: well, glad to see there are no link or citation problems. Do you think you'll tackle this article first, or Death of Cleopatra? Pericles of Athens^Talk 22:12, 12 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: hi Iazyges! Do you think you have enough spare time to do these reviews? Should someone else do them instead? It's been a while since the nomination began. Pericles of Athens^Talk 01:59, 20 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@PericlesofAthens: Should be able to work on these two tonight; apologies for dragging it out so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:01, 20 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: please do the review as soon as possible. The FA review for Cleopatra is heating up, so I would like to wrap up these GA nominations, before I get bogged down in other business. Pericles of Athens^Talk 15:58, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: thanks for reviewing the article! I have amended it according to your prose suggestions. Regards, Pericles of Athens^Talk 02:47, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]