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@Thriley: fantastic to see that someone has already started a page for this company! I think name wise we will probably have to go with something like Poppi (company) because there is a charming Italian hill town named Poppi. Happy to help expand the article and get it ready for mainspace. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 20:33, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Just moved it! Feel free to add more whenever. Thriley (talk) 23:36, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I’m thinking of adding a bit more and putting the article into mainspace as a stub. Would this be ok or would you like to expand it before I do that? Thriley (talk) 17:12, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No objection, in general I prefer to expand in mainspace because its more visible. Horse Eye's Back (talk) 17:26, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 1150-26, Writing for Others

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This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2024 and 18 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Zoefeinberg (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Zoefeinberg (talk) 13:00, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed changes:

This article is thoroughly well written and has a good outline to work with. However I think there are some content gaps and some ways I feel I can update the article to include more detail about some more recent information. To begin to edit this article, I think it would be beneficial to add an additional sentence or two to the lead section that describes the rapid rise of the company with information about their financial status as well. The lead section is the first part of the article viewers see, and since the Poppi article currently only has one sentence in the lead section, I think adding a couple more helpful points of information could be beneficial. In terms of the history section, I think it would be helpful to split up the ideas of the section into one part, discussing the founders time on Shark Tank and their rise afterwards, and then a separate part describing the company’s lawsuit this past June. This way, we are able to easily differentiate between the important points in the companies founding. I also think I could add an another sentence under the Promotion section and describe the way social media has truly influenced the brands growth. Additionally, I think it would be helpful to add a subsection of the flavors of the soda, since other similar soda Wikipedia pages mention them. All of this information I am willing to add has sources to assist in the delivery of the content. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zoefeinberg (talkcontribs) 21:35, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]