Talk:Pompey stone/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:19, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "New York circa" comma after NY.

• Added

• "moved to Albany" link.

• added

• "William M. Beauchamp did some" who was he? And can we find a better word than "did"?

• "conducted"? descriptor added

• "on display as a hoax" as an example of a hoax perhaps?

• sure

• "1520"[4]" need a full stop.

• yup

• "the 1911 capitol fire" I know it's a red link but shouldn't that be Capitol?

• sure

• "Intrigued by the stone, Cleveland brought the stone" brought it.

• done

• "blacksmith's" why apostrophe?

• I can't type all the time, cut

• "In 1841 Barber and... " avoid single-sentence paras.

• combined with the para below

• "In the 1860s...' same.

• ditto

• " ... of the European in North America." quote needs inline ref immediately.

• sure

• 'in 1894[18] upon' odd place for the ref, end of clause/sentence is fine.

• OK

• References are normally listed in alphabetical order.

• done

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:15, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks, The Rambling Man, are my responses satisfactory? Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 13:40, 3 September 2021 (UTC)