Talk:Pauline Pfeiffer
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[edit]This sentence doesn't really make sense to me:
"Although they had two sons (Patrick and Gregory), Pfeiffer was often forced to choose between following Hemingway on his travels or minding her sons." 151.151.73.169 (talk) 17:09, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
- Swapping "because" for "although" might fix the logical ugliness. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 4.231.254.65 (talk) 06:25, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
Later life and death
[edit]The information saying about Gregory Hemmingway, "...had been arrested earlier in the day as a male who was caught entering a woman's restroom in a theater" needs a reference or should be deleted. While there are lots of references to Gregory's gender identity issues available, nothing that I checked included this somewhat strange detail. He was arrested not long prior to his father's call, but that he was "caught entering a woman's restroom in a theater" is the part that I can find no reference for; and the Wikipedia article does not currently include a reference to this detail.RoseHawk (talk) 20:19, 27 September 2015 (UTC)