Talk:Paul George/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Why is the lead so short? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
What team was Paul George on in the freshman year of high school? You mention he started sophomore on JV and was he was on varsity his last 3 years, but you don't mention anything about his freshman year. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Did he play AAU ball somewhere in high school? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
When did he declare eligible for the NBA draft? When was he drafted? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" For the 2011 Playoffs" link to the 2011 NBA Playoffs. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

" In the Slam Dunk Contest, George completed a 360 windmill dunk in the dark and dunked over teammates Dahntay Jones and Roy Hibbert." what is a "360 windmill dunk"? The layman may not know. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Did he win the dunk contest? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Did he do anything in Game 2-7 in the Heat series in 2012-13? You only mention Game 1, one in when his team lost. 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
"The Pacers started the 2013–14 season 4–0 for the first time since the 2004–05 season.[35] " they are now 7-0, BTW. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Shouldn't there be some kind of "Personal life" and "Player profile" section. Other NBA athletes's articles (that are GA or better) tend to have this? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:46, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

On hold., just missing stuff here and there. Not bad though. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 13:47, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It's been four weeks since the most recent edit to this page, and almost six since the hold was started. That's a bit long; if the article isn't making sufficient steps toward fixing all the issues that were identified back then, perhaps it's time to think about closing it. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:44, 23 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]