Talk:Saraya Bevis/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 17:04, 27 May 2014 (UTC)

I'm going to start the review. It may take 1 day to a week. Thanks, TheQ Editor (Talk) 17:04, 27 May 2014 (UTC)

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

Well written

• at one point holding both titles concurrently. When exactly?

• Added.

• She grew up with her father, Ricky Knight and her mother, Sweet Saraya, who unintentionally wrestled while she was seven months pregnant-change to She grew up with her father, (Roy Bevis) and her mother, (Julia Hamer-Bevis) who unintentionally wrestled while she was seven months pregnant

• Roy Bevis is his brother. Changed Sweet Saraya to Julia Hamer-Bevis.

• in a triple threat tag team match in a loss -maybe use result in a loss

• Fixed.

• wikilink "World Association of Women's Wrestling" and "World Wide Wrestling League"

• I have already searched it ahead of time. Nothing such is found.([1] & [2])

• Knight would then allied Melodi -no would

• Removed.

• that much what is "that" referring too?

• I copied that from what she said in the interview. I'm not sure how much she is getting paid. So I removed that part and fixed some tweaks.

• WAWW British Champion, she made it all the way -no comma.

• Fixed.

• wikilink Sweet Saraya for the section World Association Of Wrestling and various promotions (2006–2011).

• Wikilinked.

• Knight with her mother - change with to and

• Changed.

• On October 2010, -start on new line

• Do you mean create a paragraph? Fixed.

• Once again, she took on her mother but this time it was for the HEW Women's Championship but her mother won. -when? and wikilink HEW Women's Championship

• Added. Wikilinked.

• was to be short lived -change to was short lived

• Fixed.

• wikilink Liberty

• Nothing is found. ([3]) FairyTailRocks 04:15, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

• to participated -change to to participate

• Fixed.

• She would lose the title - She lost the title

• Fixed.

• Prior to the reporting to Florida Championship Wrestling -grammar issue

• Fixed grammar. Changed to "Because she will be going to Florida Championship Wrestling (FCW)"

• wikilink Blue Nikita

• Nothing is found. ([4]) FairyTailRocks 04:35, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

• On the March 19 -no "the"

• Fixed.

• Marie on the 11 June -same thing as above

• Fixed.

• Paige would go on a singles winning streak -would go to went

• Fixed.

• On the 30 January 2013 episode of NXT -Are you saying about the episode the aired on NXT at 30 January 2013 or an actual episode called 30 January 2013

• NXT, Raw or any WWE shows don't have a show title. They are just the dates when the show aired.

• On the 13 February NXT change to On the Febuary 13 episode of NXT to be consistent

• The original is the British way of writing dates. There is a maintenance template above which says "use British English".

• Also at NXT Arrival which Paige once again retained her title against Emma -change to Also at NXT Arrival, Paige once again retained her title against Emma. Also add the date

• Fixed. Added.

• on 7 April 2014 episode of Raw -on 7 April 2014 to on the 7 April 2014

• Added.

• with Brie Bella went -change to with Brie Bella which went

• Fixed. FairyTailRocks 11:11, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

Referencing

• On May 2010, Knight with her mother challenged Amazon and Ananya for the PWF Ladies Tag Team Title which they won -unsourced

• Added.

• she will defend her title against Fox at Payback -when?

• Fixed.

• don't use ring names in the Personal Life section

• Fixed.

• Remove the twitter external link for Paige. See Wikipedia:Twitter#Twitter

• Removed. FairyTailRocks 04:44, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

Broadness

*needs to add the dates of some events described above

• Added some.

NPOV

Stability

Images

• Please describe the image in the infobox with more detail.

• Added WP:ALT in the infobox as well to the other images. FairyTailRocks 13:36, 28 May 2014 (UTC)