Talk:Pablo Sandoval/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 15:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good on first glance. Looking forward to reviewing this. ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 15:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I have been too busy to work on new articles lately, but I will have plenty of time to polish this one up. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 21:10, 12 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Sanfranciscogiants17: Apparently, the link to Kung Fu Panda was already removed when I was reviewing it, so you didn't need to add it. I removed it again, unless there were reasons why he was nicknamed Kung Fu Panda. Thanks, ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 13:46, 18 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

IMPORTANT - Please refer to this permanent link when talking about references.

Lead barely has any info on Early Life and Personal Life.
no need to link to Kung Fu Panda
The caption for the infobox picture needs a period.
"but he did not show up for two weeks" sounds like the scout came after two weeks. how about dropping the "for two weeks"?
the caption for the picture needs a period.
the third paragraph of 2009 is too short per GA requirements, perhaps merging it into another paragraph.
in May Sandoval - punctuation
months after - specify
File:Pablo Sandoval, 2012 World Series parade.jpg needs a period