Talk:Obesity and walking/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jmh649 (talk · contribs) 17:41, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Three initial comments

• References must be to secondary sources rather than primary ones. Please see WP:MEDRS for details.
• References should also be formatted with the site template so that we can easily link to the PMID or ISBN / page number WP:MEDHOW will give you further instruction

• Please have a read of WP:MEDMOS and WP:MOS for guidance on formatting issues such as caps.

Drop me a note when done. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 17:41, 11 January 2013 (UTC)