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It would be helpful to add more information about the wind farm area Hereandnow101 —Preceding undated comment added 16:00, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]


It would benefit to read the article out loud, and correct some of the choppy flow of the article. The pictures are very well done, however. OlenkaFawkes (talk) 15:56, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

October 2012

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Adding additional information concerning the Hydrogen Village, The expansion of the Wind Test Site slated to be complete in 2013, along with information on tourism, geographical and historical significance of the area. Notlock (talk) 21:56, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Over all this is looking pretty good. There where just a few facts that would be good to clear up. Firstly, in the wind farm section, it would be good to state who the power is distributed to specifically. I'm assuming Atlantic Canadians, but a clarification on that would be good. Also, in the Wind Energy Institute of Canada Section, could you specify who gave that $12 million dollar grant? These facts would add some extra clarity. Thecfed (talk) 16:23, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I also enjoyed reading about the North Cape. You have done an excellent job at enhancing the article. I just have some further suggestions to enhance your article.

Tourism

  • link to “Wind and Reef” website (even if its to a review of the restaurant from another website, such as tripadvisor)
  • link to Wikipedia article “Sedimentary rock”

Wind Farms

  • confusing tenses about the phases of the project: maybe change to “Phase One was completed on November 16, 2001 and Phase Two was completed in November 2003. The Second Phase of the project added an additional 8 v-47 wind turbines”
  • link to Wikipedia article “wind turbines” the FIRST time you mention them
  • can you explain what “8 v-47” means?
  • link to Wikipedia article “Crown corporations of Canada”
  • change “twenty eight kilometres long” to “twenty-eight kilometres long”
  • link to Wikipedia article “Maritime Electric”

Hydrogen Village

  • “to help supplement the 10.3 million…” is there supposed to be a dollar sign here?
  • can you source that it is still in the testing stage?
  • maybe separate your paragraph to then detail how the Hydrogen Village works (“water molecules…”)
  • change “on site” to “on-site”
  • the sentences in the last bit are confusing. Perhaps try “Hydrogen can only be produced when there is adequate windy conditions. When there is a lack of wind, the hydrogen is then mixed with diesel to be used in generators to produce electricity”
  • I would maybe end with the sentence about the application of the Hydrogen Village in isolated climates. Perhaps you could research if other governments have looked into implementing this technology and/or ideal locations?

Seaweed

  • can you explain the end of the sentence, “until recently, as a stabilizer in commercial products.”? I found this confusing. Perhaps link to another Wikipedia article.

LaCarlotta (talk) 18:54, 25 November 2012 (UTC)LaCarlotta[reply]

References for Expansion

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Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

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This article is the subject of an educational assignment at Mount Allison University supported by Canada Education Program and the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2012 Q3 term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:20, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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