Talk:My World (Justin Bieber EP)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash ^{talk} 15:11, 20 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi; as requested, I'll be reviewing this article. I'm not familiar (really, at all) with music-related articles, but from what I can see, this is in well-off shape. I only have a few concerns:

I'm noticing a lot of bare URLs, which are a no-no. Please fix all of them so that they use Template:Cite web or Template:Cite news.
Wikilink to YouTube in "Background."
In "Background," is "IThink" how it's misspelled in the ref? If so, please add {{sic}} after it.
In "Reception," "According to the music review aggregator Metacritic, the album had mostly favorable reviews, it has received an average score of 65 out of 100 points." -> Change to "[...]mostly favorable reviews, with an average score[...]"
Also in "Reception," for the quote from Rolling Stone, please change "But who could deny "First Dance," where[...]" to "[...]deny 'First Dance,' where[...]" so there's no quotes within quotes.
The track listing shows "Part I," but what about "Part II"? Is that info known/available?

That's all. Take care of the above and I'll be happy to pass the article. Cheers, The Flash ^{talk} 15:11, 20 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Also note that footnotes should be placed after a full stop/comma, not before. The leftorium 15:23, 20 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, now that all of the ref issues and other problems have been taken care of, I've gone ahead and passed this as GA. Nice work. The Flash ^{talk} 17:01, 27 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]