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A fact from More & More (Twice song) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 25 July 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the music video for Twice's song "More & More" was inspired by the Garden of Eden (depicted)?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2020/July. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/More & More (Twice song).

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:22, 19 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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The Garden of Earthly Delights, late 15th century

~~... that the Garden of Eden-themed music video for Twice's "More & More" went viral on YouTube garnering over 14.7 million views in only 15 hours?~~ Source:[1]

5x expanded by Ashleyyoursmile (talk). Self-nominated at 15:52, 9 June 2020 (UTC).[reply]

5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits.
I'm just wondering if this is the hookiest thing that can be said here? Many videos go viral. Yoninah (talk) 18:46, 6 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1: ~~... that the music video for Twice's song "More & More" was inspired by the Garden of Eden?~~

@Yoninah and Ashleyyoursmile: Would this option work? I know the word "inspired" isn't used in the article but using "centered on" or "themed on" didn't sound right; ideas on more appropriate wording would also be appreciated. Nevertheless, the Garden of Eden angle might be a good starting point, especially if the picture used in the Garden of Eden article is used in both the hook and the article. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:53, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Narutolovehinata5, I am more than okay with your suggestion though "centered on" seems fine to me. I will gladly add the picture of Garden of Eden article to this song page and hook, once Yoninah also agrees to that. Ashley yoursmile! 07:18, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, go ahead. Yoninah (talk) 08:22, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1a: ... that the music video for Twice's song "More & More" was inspired by the Garden of Eden (illustrated)?

Very nice. ALT1a hook ref verified and cited inline. Image is freely licensed. ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 06:28, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]