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Former good articleMeteor III was one of the Engineering and technology good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the American-made schooner Meteor III was the largest yacht in the world when built for German Emperor Wilhelm II?
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Tonnage

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Gross register tons and net register tons are not measures of displacement. I converted the field to tonnage, which apparently is not supported by the infobox. I have requested help here. In the meantime, please do not restore displacement as it is erroneous. Kablammo (talk) 15:06, 22 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I have used a different template which supports a tonnage field. If and when the yacht infobox template does the same, it can be changed back. Kablammo (talk) 16:48, 22 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:11, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Article title needs italicising, use something like {{italic title}}.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:31, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I know the article is brief, but the lead could use a little more.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:09, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • German Emperor in the lead, Kaiser in the infobox, be consistent.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:30, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Where is the tonnage in the infobox referenced?
 Done - Reference [1} "Schonerjacht METEOR III" says Verdrängung 314 t. Removed tonnage numbers of 162 NRT and 170 GRT as no references could be found to verify these.
  • "Yampa passed through several" -> "Yampa had several"
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:08, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "eventually purchased by the German emperor." "was" missing here. And again, be consistent with Wilhelm's title.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:17, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " in foreign regattas" foreign to Germany?
 Done - changed "foreign" to European
  • "was so well pleased" no need for well.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:40, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the naval architect Smith" probably should introduce him as this, not wait until his third mention.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:44, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "had going of naming" no need for "going".
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Meteor III, was built" no comma.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:19, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to put together " construct?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Miss Alice Roosevelt" why Miss?
 Done - took out "Miss" and copy edited to show "18 year old daughter." --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:33, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "emperor's younger brother, Prince Henry of Prussia, traveled from Europe to New York City to attend as the Kaiser's " emperor and Kaiser in the same sentence!
 Done - corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:23, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "10:30 A.M." -> 10:30 a.m. (with a non-breaking space).
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:26, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Miss Roosevelt christened the American-built schooner constructed for the emperor " Alice. And we know it was American-built and constructed for the emperor already, no need to repeat again.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:34, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The yacht up to that point was just labeled job No. 24 by the shipyard. " -> "Up to that point, the yacht was referred to as job no. 24 by the shipyard"
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:36, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Next to her was Prince Henry, President Roosevelt, and a group of official guests." you've said most of this already.
 Done - removed this sentence. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:44, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The time was 10:39 in the morning." odd brief sentence, merge the salient point (10:39 a.m.) into one of the preceding sentences.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:45, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "As the champagne was still foaming" sounds like a tabloid report.
 Done - removed. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:52, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Miss Roosevelt used a silver looking nickel hatchet to cut the cord that then released the yacht into the water" repeating a little of the previous sentence. And just stick with Alice. And do you mean "silver-looking"?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:54, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Cannons were fired and brass bands were played. There " merge, "Cannons were fired, brass bands played and there ..."
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:57, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Meteor III yacht leaving" italics for yacht name.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:01, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was launched into the water a message" comma after water.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:18, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Harries put the yacht for sale " maybe USEng, but I'd say "up" for sale.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:31, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "sale in 1921 at Barcelona, Spain.[22] It sold in 1922 " repetitive.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:31, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "n 1924 Bunau-Varilla sold her to Italian " rename the boat here.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:32, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "for a few months" not encyclopedic tone.
 Done corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:35, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "who didn't " avoid contractions.
 Done corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:51, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "resold her to Gerald S. Foley who later sold her to a Mr. David Feinburg. Feinburg sold" repetitive repetitive.
 Done - corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:52, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Navy requisitioned" by the time we've done the rounds, worth emphasising that this was the United States Navy.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:56, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and became the property" she became.
 Done - copy edited. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:57, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • You abbreviate WSA but never use it, pointless.
 Done - removed "WSA" --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:01, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "owners updated the yacht during their ownership" repetitive.
 Done - corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "by the War Shipping Administration since" okay so use WSA here instead.
 Done - copy edited accordingly. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:10, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " the yacht was originally built in 1902. The yacht that" repetitive "the yacht".
 Done - copy edited accordingly.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:24, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "broken up and taken apart" tautological.
 Done - copy edited accordingly.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:25, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Meteor III was based on the Yampa design. (circa 1902)" -> "Meteor III (circa 1902) was based on the Yampa design."
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:30, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • waterline or water-line?
 Done corrected to 120 feet on the water line --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " the emperor.[5][7][30] The emperor " repetitive.
 Done - copy edited accordingly. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:45, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " in Colonial Adams" no idea what this means.
 Done copy edited and linked. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:56, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Spaced hyphens in the ref titles should be spaced en-dashes.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:07, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Italics for ship names throughout.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:31, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's it on a first pass. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:35, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: - all issues addressed. Can you take another look at it now. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Doug Coldwell vastly improved, really good work. I made a couple of minor tweaks, but I'm good to go with promotion now, so well done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 13:50, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright contributor investigation and Good article reassessment

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This article is part of Wikipedia:Contributor copyright investigations/20210315 and the Good article (GA) drive to reassess and potentially delist over 200 GAs that might contain copyright and other problems. An AN discussion closed with consensus to delist this group of articles en masse, unless a reviewer opens an independent review and can vouch for/verify content of all sources. Please review Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/February 2023 for further information about the GA status of this article, the timeline and process for delisting, and suggestions for improvements. Questions or comments can be made at the project talk page. MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 09:36, 9 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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