Talk:A and B Loop/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 20:05, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

1. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

Review

Lead

• I recommend bypassing the redirect and wikilinking Rose Quarter and Oregon Health & Science University instead through either a pipe link or directly

Done.

Opening and closing of the loop

• Reference #38 says Project officials say they are confident the line will open by its new date, Sept. 21, 2012. but the line it is sourcing says The 3.3-mile (5.3 km) eastside extension opened on September 22, 2012.

I've added a second ref; the correct date is September 22. Keeping that existing one for the "five-month delay" piece.

• Reference #39 doesn't really show they renamed the original service the "North South Line" (NS Line). I guess it's okay but a better reference is preferable

Replaced ref.

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thank you very much for taking on this review. I believe I have addressed all of your points. Stay safe! --truflip99 (talk) 07:24, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

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