Talk:LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)/GA1
GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Overall I find this a very good article, although a bit long at some parts. There's a ton of changes in the edit history this week so it might be a bit unstable.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- As far as I can tell, yes.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
I'm missing a critism section though, if there is any.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Lot of (constructive) changes in the last week.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- I'm going to request another opinion on this one, since this is a quite popular article and I'm no review expert. --MrStalker (talk) 10:32, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
- Passed :D Just keep up the good work! Also consider doing a GA review of your own. --MrStalker (talk) 15:44, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
- I'm going to request another opinion on this one, since this is a quite popular article and I'm no review expert. --MrStalker (talk) 10:32, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
Hi, I'm happy to over a second opinion, I'll just review it and get back to you shortly. \ / (⁂) 01:17, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
- Gone through the article, and I would have no problems in passing the article. Apart from the first line, which needs a little rewording, the article is satisfactory. I also believe the stability relates to edit wars and content disputes, not necessarily good faith improvements. \ / (⁂) 02:17, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
As a fairly regular editor on this article, I just wanted to point out in response to "Fair representation without bias: I'm missing a criticism section though, if there is any." I thought Criticism sections were generally discouraged? Instead, this article's Reception section offers a balanced account of the coverage the game has received, good and bad. Thanks for the feedback. ChimpanzeeUK - User | Talk | Contribs 09:01, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
- Hmm, I don't know actually. I've just seen it in a lot of other articles. You're probably right. As I said, I'm no expert. --MrStalker (talk) 15:44, 17 November 2008 (UTC)