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Tone tag

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I tried to tone down the opening paragraphs, but it still seems to be a bit non-encyclopedic. It might require more editing. Thoughts? Aristophanes68 (talk) 20:23, 10 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Updates

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I have wikified (infobox, wikilinks), added some in-line references, and removed/replaced some tags. Not bad considering I usually stick to horse racing articles. Tone of lede (especially) is still problematic.  Tigerboy1966  20:36, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Slightly weird page history, thanks to User:Msmarin who seems to have deliberately de-wikified the text in Feb 2011, in what were her only edits ever. Very odd.  Tigerboy1966  20:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]