Talk:LGBTQ culture in Puerto Vallarta/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:53, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Thanks for reviewing! Looking forward to collaborating and addressing your concerns. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:11, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

@Sammi Brie: I've gone through a first round of revisions based on your feedback. Please let me know if there's anything else required, and thanks again for your help! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:35, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

Lead

• Puerto Vallarta's LGBT culture is based in Zona Romántica perhaps the Zona Romántica?
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:11, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
• "many business" should be "many businesses"
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:11, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
• Remove comma in Puerto Vallarta has been recognized as a safe destination for LGBT travelers, but has not gone without violence against LGBT people. See User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences (CinS)
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:11, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Tourism

• The New York Times' Ondine Cohane said in 2016: "with a plethora of gay bars and clubs (and a four-year-old Gay Pride event), the city has the deserved reputation for being one of the most L.G.B.T.-friendly destinations south of the border". In 2023, Lola Mendez of The Times said one fifth of the city's visitors are "members of the LGBT community, according to official tourism figures. Gay travellers have been visiting Puerto Vallarta since the 1960s and have dubbed Zona Romantica, where Vallarta Pride is held, the 'gayborhood'." The Yucatán Times called the city "super-gay" in 2019.
  • Any way we can say more of this in our voice than in quotes? This article is chock-full of quotes. Too many, for my taste, though some are merited.
  • MOS:'S: that should be Times's.
  • Consider conforming the grammar/typography in the quotes to the article with things like missing accents, abbreviations without periods, etc. MOS:CONFORM.

• • • Hopefully I've addressed your concerns for this section. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:32, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Businesses

• What is a "video bar"?
  • A bar with screens for playing media (most often music videos). ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:16, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
• due to the lack of government funding maybe "a" lack of government funding
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:16, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Sourcing and spot checks

It is very strange to look at a Mexico article in which there are nearly zero Spanish-language sources. Certainly there is something in Spanish that can enrich this article and provide possibly a less touristy coverage aspect. Your reviewer is a fluent Spanish speaker, if you have any questions. I try to take on a higher share of GANs from the Spanish-speaking world.

• 19: Daily Xtra: Zona Romantica. Almost all the gay businesses are located in the south end of the city in the historic district of Emiliano Zapata. ... El Centro. This is the city's downtown, located just north of the Zona Romantica on the other side of the Cuale River. Although some refer to the Zona Romantica as the "Old Town," El Centro is older. This side of the river now has only two gay bars and just one gay men-only B&B... Y
• 30: PinkNews: Round the corner you have Club Paco Paco, also known as Paco’s Ranch, which many locals would tell you no gay night in Vallarta is complete without. Y
• 40: Hmm, I'm unsure. Even though the ref content is backed by the source content, GayPV seems to have a lot of business listings, and we have 25 references to it. That's a lot. That makes me quite hesitant in general.
• 48: See 40.
• 63: Almar Resort Luxury LGBT Beach Front Experience Y
• 69: It proves that the Palm has hosted a drag show, but it's also a press release. Why is this here?
• 77: At least this mentions that Palm hosted one of the drag shows mentioned. Y
• 80: It's a review that seems to check out, but is it reliable?
• 82: Instead of canceling, Sanker moved the event to nearby Nuevo Vallarta, just 10 miles north, but in a different state with more relaxed Covid-19 regulations, according to NBC affiliate KMIR of Palm Springs, California, where Sanker began his White Parties nearly 30 years ago. Ticket holders got messages from Sanker's company, White Party Entertainment, asking them not to post about the party on social media to avoid "causing any issues with the public," according to KMIR and photos shared on social media. It's no surprise that Sanker — who didn't respond to multiple requests for comment over a period of five days — wanted to keep the event out of the public eye. Americans vacationing and gathering during the pandemic against the advice of public health officials have been the target of fierce criticism and public shaming on social media. Y Maybe mention that the White Party was moved to Nuevo Vallarta in Nayarit?
• 87: Its Pride celebration, held in mid- to late-May, ... Y
• 99: Hey look, it's one of the sources provided on the talk page in Spanish! It does check out. Maybe mention that Jalisco state law does not classify or track anti-LGBT crimes. Y

• • I would very much welcome the addition of Spanish-language sources, but as someone who does not speak Spanish, I would encourage others to improve the article appropriately. You'll notice I've shared some Spanish-language sources here. My goal has been to create a solid foundation which can be expanded and improved by other Wikipedia editors. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
    • It's a solid foundation, and you've made some effort to make it more in encyclopedic voice, but I still feel like there are too many business entries being used as sources. That's just a hangup for me. I think this can be a GA with fewer of those references, but right now we have 25 references to GayPV when only a handful could probably stand. That will require some reworking of this article tonally to be less about "this business does X, this bar has Y, and this spa offers Z" in places. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:18, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

Media

The article is drenched in photos. There are 17 of them, all but one from the nominator, and though all are appropriately licensed, I am not sure if the pictures of publications are in actuality reproductions of copyrighted works. I wonder if the article needs all of these images given, say, MOS:SANDWICH.

• If you're going to do alt text, there are some cases where the alt text must provide context equivalent to what a sighted person does. The last image does not: Photograph of a sign on a pole I can read the sign. A screen reader user can't.
  • I've removed four images, including the two of magazine covers. I do not see any sandwiched text but please let me know if you think any other images should be removed. Also, I've added additional context for the alt text of photo of the sign. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:26, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

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