Talk:James Wiseman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:32, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Will be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 16:32, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "He served part of the suspension before withdrawing from school to prepare for the upcoming draft." - please clarify which upcoming draft Wisewman was preparing for

High school career

• "By the summer of 2016," - try not to mention seasons per MOS:SEASON
• "He joined the St. Louis Eagles Amateur Athletic Union (AAU) team." - please removed the acronyms in parentheses since they are not used anywhere else in the article
• Also, please added when exatly Wiseman joined the St. Louis Eagles AAU team
• Wikilink points, rebounds and blocks to the relevant articles
• "Wiseman was ruled ineligible for his junior season by the TSSAA" - you can shorten this sentence so that it reads as the TSSAA ruled Wiseman ineligible for his junior season
• "while appearing in the McDonald's All-American Game, Jordan Brand Classic, and Nike Hoop Summit." - the Jordan Brand Classic, and the Nike Hoop Summit.

Recruting

• "On November 29, Wiseman signed a National Letter of Intent to play for Memphis." - I think you want to make it clear that Wiseman signed a National Letter of Intent to play college basketball

College career

• "He was sidelined from the team's two preseason games in October with an ankle injury." - you can state Wiseman sustained a right ankle injury as stated in The Commercial Appeal source used to cite this sentence
• "as the Tigers defeated South Carolina State, 97-64." - please use an en dash (–) instead of a hyphen per MOS:DASH
• "ruled him ineligible." - ineligible to play for Memphis.
• "Hours later," - how many hours later exactly?
• " he had 17 points and nine rebounds to lead Memphis past UIC, 92-46." - same issue as the second query in this subsection
• "He was one of the highest rated prospects in his class." - please state if possible who regarded Wiseman as "one of the highest rated prospects in his class."

References

• Reference 1 is dead and will need to be archived
• Reference 19 is missing the author who wrote the story and its publication date

Shall be placing this review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:45, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

• @MWright96: All comments have been addressed, although the link to Reference 1 works for me. Sportzeditz (talk) 18:24, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
  • @Sportzeditz: Think it must be that yours truly is residing in a different country to you. Nevertheless, am satisfied with the changes and will promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:09, 10 April 2020 (UTC)