Talk:How the Scots Invented the Modern World/GA1

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Reviewer: Ottava Rima (talk) 03:17, 30 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've read through this and I would normally put up the six standards, but I have no lengthy lists of concerns or suggestions. Instead, my concern is very limited:

"A clergy who believed that a moral and religious foundation was required for, and compatible with, a free and open sophisticated culture moderated hardline conservatives"

This is a proper sentence, but is disconnected from the rest. You could say "There existed in Scotland a clergy..." or something else to that effect. Ottava Rima (talk) 03:17, 30 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

That is it. Cheers. Ottava Rima (talk) 03:17, 30 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Good catch. Thanks for reviewing. maclean (talk) 19:35, 30 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]