Talk:Chloridea virescens/GA1

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:38, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I am taking a look and making some straightforward copyedits as I go. I'll jot questions/issues below:

It needs a Taxonomy section as first section, including such information as when it was described and by whom, what its name means, what it is related to, common name and alternative common names.

It needs a Description section describing what it looks like and how it can be distinguished from related or similar-looking species. I'd make the life cycle material a subsection of this, moving the adult material to the top.

Try and avoid one-sentence paragraphs. Combine or expand if possible.

The lead is a summary of important points of the article, so a brief description of the adult's appearance should be there.

Earwig's copyvio clear

Anyway, I'll go into more detail if I see some activity. Cheers. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:38, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, nothing's happening here so it's a fail for the time being. If anyone is keen to do the above and re-nominate, ping me and I will be happy to take a look Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:37, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]