Talk:Great Notch station

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Date	Process	Result
October 24, 2009	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk) 18:35, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

"train station at Great Notch": "Great Notch train station" would sound better.
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
In sentence "The station is serviced seven times a day, three inbound morning trains to Hoboken Terminal and four outbound evening trains from Hoboken. by the Montclair-Boonton Line from Monday to Friday.", change period after Hoboken to comma.
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Can you add a section of the article that describes the station, similar to what is in Sloatsburg (Metro-North station)?
What is there to say? The station hasn't had any structure since the 60s or 70s.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"June of 1979" should be "June 1979".
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The sentence "During the construction of the Montclair Connection in 2001, Great Notch Yard, adjacent to the station, received a major upgrade, becoming a new state-of-the-art yard with new trains stored." sounds very fragmented and needs to be rewritten.
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"along with the presence of the nearby Montclair State University": indicate that this is a train station.
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The sentence "The future of the 103-year old station was placed into further jeopardy when on August 12, 2008, New Jersey Transit announced to the community of Little Falls that they may close the station as early as October 2008" sounds awkward.
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The sentence "The service with only one inbound train (to Hoboken) and two outbound trains (from Hoboken) was cancelled on April 1, 2009, when New Jersey Transit announced it would add two more trains in each direction on April 16 as a "one-year trial" for the station." also sounds awkward.
Done.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Can a picture of the station be added to the article?
There was a map. As soon as I get to the station, or if someone has one, I'll add it.Mitch32^{(The Password is... See here!)} 21:51, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 18:35, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 23:07, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]