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The article looks pretty good. Here are my concerns:

Lead

  • Link "fifth season" to Two and a Half Men (Season 5).
  • This sentence doesn't make any sense: "The episode revolves around Teddy Leopold (Robert Wagner), being found dead on Charlie (Charlie Sheen) his bed during Teddy and Evelyn (Holland Taylor) their wedding reception."

Plot

  • I assume "hoo-hoo" means penis? If so, replace it with that.
  • "The bruise had happened two days earlier." - Explain how or delete.

Cultural References

  • This section is completely unreferenced. Either add references or delete it.

Production

  • Explain who Naren Shankar is.
  • The lead mentions the writers of the episode, but this section doesn't. Please add writers and directors to this section, as well as guest stars if possible.

Reception

  • I think you can add more reception from this article: [1].
  • Explain who Conchata Ferrell and Jeff Melman are.

Other

  • Are you sure you can't get any more production out of this article: [2]?
  • [3] - This links doesn't work.


I will put the article on hold for a week. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 17:11, 28 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think you're issues have been taken care of, note that I didn't expand the information from the TV Squad link, but added another reference, from Zap2it.--Music26/11 23:58, 29 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, I will pass the article. TheLeftorium 12:27, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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