Talk:DMT Azul/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 7 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Should be up tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 17:21, 7 August 2016 (UTC)

• Excellent, look forward to working with you on this.  MPJ-DK *

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dab links

Lead

• "Professional wrestling promotion" - The first P doesn't need to be capitalised
• "In early 2012 was given a new image and ring name," - missing "he"

Professional wrestling career

• "Lucha libre has a long held tradition of not revealing the birth name of masked wrestlers unless they are later unmasked" - this sentence is missing a full stop

Metro (2009-2012)

• Delink Mexico City since it is already link in the previous sub-section
• "slowly advancing up the ranks to some times working in the semi-main event on a few shows." - some times is one word
• "The "Metro" ring character was introduced in 2006 and had previously been given given to young wrestlers who had yet to establish their own ring character." - repititon of the word given
• "The first part of the tournament took place on December 22, 2009 and the second part of the tournament took place on December 29." - same for took place
• "He was the first wrestler eliminated in the seeding battle royal and then lost to Héctor Garza, then-reigning CMLL World Heavyweight Champion. in the first round." - remove the full stop after the word Champion
• "On November 18, 2010, Máscara Dorada announced that he was relinquishing his part of the Mexican National Trios Championship due to holding three other championships at the same time.. " - remove duplicate full stop at the end of this sentence
• "Diamante Azul was part of "Block B" that competed on the August 6, 2010 Super Viernes show." - You want to change Diamante Azul to Metro for consistency in the sub-section

Diamante Azul (2012-present)

• Here you use a mixture of Diamante Azul and Azul - please rectify this
• Same for On/in xxxx - only some sentences have a comma and others don't
• Delink France per WP:OVERLINK
• "Azul and Rush finished their tour with a pay-per-view on December 2," - pay-per-view event?
• "the ring in May, 2016working for CMLL" - remove the comma and added space between 2016 and working
• "reigning CMLL worl d Tag Team Champions" - remove the space in the word World

References

• References 9, 33 & 38 are redirects to their respective home page and not to their intended links. Can archive links be found for those sources?

That's all the points I found. On hold until everything is actioned. MWright96 (talk) 12:05, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

• @MWright96: - I believe I have addressed all of your concerns and comments.  MPJ-DK  22:38, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

@MPJ-DK: I made one fix in the article, other than that, it is good for GA quality. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 9 August 2016 (UTC)