Talk:Deutschland-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk • contribs • count) 15:04, 10 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
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Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

"Deutschland was not particularly successful on her raiding sortie, during which she sank or captured three ships." True, but German admiralty thought her deployment was successful in tying down British forces and thus relieving Admiral Graf Spee. MisterBee1966 (talk) 13:03, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"Lützow was raised and broken up for scrap" Wrong, she was sunk in Soviet bomb tests. This is based on the newly opened Soviet archives MisterBee1966 (talk) 13:03, 29 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I'll need citations for both of those before I can add them. Parsecboy (talk) 12:10, 3 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  - regarding her fate you can have a look at the German Wiki article. It sums up what Prager writes on pages 317–320. MisterBee1966 (talk) 07:34, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    - Finally got the time to get to this. Added now. Parsecboy (talk) 00:35, 15 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Can the review be continued/completed? Everything seems to be addressed thus far. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:11, 25 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]