Talk:David Cohen (lawyer)

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I welcome any feedback on how this page can be improved.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Kareem at CanadaVisa (talk • contribs) 04:51, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This page was clearly marked as self promoting and really needs extra work (broken links, irrelevant content, self promoting content, no sources etc). If you are going to publish a paid entry at least get it right and according to Wikipedia's guidelines. Our ability to fix most issues is limited as we are not familiar with the article's subject like the original editor.SameHere90210 (talk) 16:45, 22 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I solicited a lot of feedback and guidance before submitting this page for review. Fellow members confirmed this page passed the notability test due to, for among other reasons, the testimony provided to the Canadian Senate and Parliament. I have once again gone through the links and none of them appear to be broken so I welcome your guidance here. I also welcome guidance on where the article appears to be self-promotional and where additional sources are required. I solicited this sort of feedback previously and was informed that the page complied with Wikipedia's policies. Of course, there is always room for improvement. Thank you for your help.Kareem at CanadaVisa (talk) 21:54, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Legalife103 can you provide specific examples of how this article can be improved? I appreciate your help. Kareem at CanadaVisa (talk) 22:21, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kareem at CanadaVisa Hi. As mentioned before, the article had some issues regarding its self promoting tone, unsourced content etc. You seem to have fixed most issues. Legalife103 (talk) 13:21, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article is totally self promotional and papers over the many ways David Cohen's law firm, which on the internet is located at https://www.canadavisa.com, and is legally called something else, itself broke the law. The whole article needs major scrutiny from all of Wikipedia as the firm runs numerous scams which affects people outside of Canada severely. — Preceding unsigned comment added by The-writer-2022 (talk • contribs) 02:31, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]