Talk:Cypriot nationality law/GA1
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 09:36, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
I will review this, it might take a few days. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 09:36, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- The Central Powers source should be at the end per WP:CITEFOOT.
- Fixed.
- An WP:INLINE citation is needed for the divide and rule sentence, otherwise it needs rewording as it seems a little WP:POV
- Added additional reference to Xypolia.
- Is there a name for the 1930 law that let Cypriots opt for turkish nationality but not left the island?
- No, the original order published in the Cyprus Gazette doesn't have a name.
- A source needed for the British nationality 1948 sentence
- Was sourced to references at end of paragraph but rearranged to more clearly cite.
- Source needed for the 1967 intercommunal violence.
- Also rearranged.
- Source for the establishment of the turkish republic
- Added appropriate page to the citation for that paragraph.
More to come The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 10:48, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- "Cypriot citizens remain Commonwealth citizens in British law", another CITEFOOT issue
- Fixed.
- Same for "Cypriot citizens have since been able to live and work in other EU/EFTA countries"
- Fixed.
- Citizenship by investment's opening paragraph could do with additional citations for the criteria in the body
- Broke citation at end of paragraph into individual references in body.
- Was there a court case or any sanctions for the programme violating the Treaty?
- No, the European Commission didn't get that far before the government was embarrassed into ending the programme itself.
- Source needed for opening sentence of Citizenship by descent
- Added appropriate page to the citation for that paragraph.
- Same for Naturalisation
- Attributed to citation at end of paragraph.
- Same for Relinquishment
- Attributed to citation at end of paragraph.
- The reference for the Treaty establishing Cyprus needs more information, like the NYT source as per WP:CITEWEB
- Switched to Template:cite web.
- In all @Horserice:, it is looking good but just needs those majority citation issues sorted. Ping me when its done and I will have another look. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:18, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- @The C of E: Thanks for taking a look at this article. I've gone through and addressed everything. Let me know if there's anything more you want me to adjust. Cheers, Horserice (talk) 09:05, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good to me then @Horserice:, congratulations on your GA. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:14, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
- @The C of E: Thanks for taking a look at this article. I've gone through and addressed everything. Let me know if there's anything more you want me to adjust. Cheers, Horserice (talk) 09:05, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- In all @Horserice:, it is looking good but just needs those majority citation issues sorted. Ping me when its done and I will have another look. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:18, 6 January 2023 (UTC)