Talk:Ciao Italia: Live from Italy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:56, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Just a few minor errors, mainly easy-to-fix prose problems Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:09, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• "...playing in front of 1.5 million audience" → playing in front of an audience of 1.5 million
• "...appears in an aspect ratio of 1.33:1 on the..." is 1.33:1 not more well-known as 4:3?
• Be consistent with your ellipses (...), the first time they are surrounded by square brackets, but the second time they are not
• "It also charted at three on the Finnish DVD chart" → It also charted at number three on the Finnish DVD chart
• "It is was released..." whoops
• Credits and personnel: think about {{col-2}}ing these. Can a source be provided?

  All done Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:13, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. I did the Finnish Chart thing which you missed :). I will pass the article now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:06, 22 October 2010 (UTC)