Talk:Christine Love (writer)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:05, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

I'll make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and drop questions below. Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:05, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

• Lead has three consecutive sentences beginning with "She..."

• Last two sentences of lead have "currently in them

• Add descriptor for Riva Celso in lead

• "largely unsuccessfully" tried to sell - de-quote.

• her first "big" game - de-quote. you mean commercially successful? or...what?

• the free game was downloaded by "countless thousands", - I think this is the sort of thing that an independent source would be needed. Also de-quoting and rewording.

• add descriptor for Gamasutra

• There are rather alot of direct quotes. I do agree that many are good and add to the prose...but I think if some could be ditched it'd be good.

Interesting read overall. Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:22, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

I've "addressed" your "points", as well as removed/reworded "a bunch of quotes". --PresN 01:56, 9 December 2012 (UTC)

1. Well written?:

Prose quality:

Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources:

Citations to reliable sources, where required:

No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects:

Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:

Pass or Fail: Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:06, 9 December 2012 (UTC)