Talk:Chabela Romero/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "the UWA World Women's Championship once and the Japanese All Pacific Championship once." - and both the Mexican National Women's Championship and the UWA World Women's Championship once.

Professional wrestling career

• "it is not certain who Romero won the championship from" - uncertain as to who Romero
• "In 1965/1966" - 1965 to 1966
• "Records are uncertain when Romero's third and final reign as the Mexican National Women's Championship ended," - uncertain as to when
• "as a result of her Lucha de APuestas victory on November 1, 1975." - the character in bold is unneeded
• "working for All Japan Women's Pro-Wrestling (AJW)" - the acronyms are unneeded since they are not used again
• "on a Universal Wrestling Association show." - the acronyms of UWA should be mentioned in parentheses
• "in which Romero defeated Vicki Williams to win the UWA World Women's Championship," - the comma should be replaced by a period to end the sentence
• "forcing her to be shaved bald afterwards" - afterward
• "shaved bald afterwards," - the comma should be replaced by a period to end the sentence
• "for reasons that have not been documented." - undocumented reasons.

Death

• "Isabela Romero Rangel died on April 19, 1985." - What did she die of? Do we know?

References

• Try not to use a reference from Facebook if possible

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:42, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 - fixed and replaced all issues. I was not able to find any specific case of her death unfortunately. MPJ-DK (talk) 01:30, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK:} Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:45, 28 May 2020 (UTC)