Talk:California State Route 94/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 03:17, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   • The first paragraph of the lead reads awkward to me. I would reword it to "State Route 94 (SR 94), located in the U.S. state of California, runs from Interstate 5 (I-5) in downtown San Diego east to I-8 near Boulevard. The western portion between I-5 and east of SR 125 in Spring Valley is the Martin Luther King Jr. Freeway. The non-freeway segment of SR 94 from there east to I-8 is known as Campo Road."

   • Reworded. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

   • In the Campo Road section of the history, why is "road" lowercase in "Campo road"? Was it formally called Campo Road, or was it just know as the Campo road? Same thing for "Sweetwater bridge".

   • It was known as the Campo road, according to the source; same with the bridge. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

   • " the next entire winter" sounds weird, I would suggest rewording to "all of the next winter" or something similar.

   • Done. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   • The 1938 California map reference is missing an accessdate.

   • Done. --Rschen7754 04:36, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • In the first sentence of the route description, you should mention SR 94 begins at I-5.

   • Fixed. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

   • You should mention which side of the road Lemon Grove and La Mesa are on where SR 94 forms the boundary.

   • Done. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

   • You should probably mention where SR 94 transitions from developed areas to more rural surroundings.

   • Done. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

   • You should probably also mention where SR 94 downgrades from a multi-lane highway to a two-lane road.

   • I've indicated where the freeway part ends. --Rschen7754 04:36, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I will place the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough4872 03:42, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

All done. --Rschen7754 04:54, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

I will now pass the article. Dough4872 00:24, 28 October 2014 (UTC)