Talk:Bored (song)

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Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
November 29, 2020	Good article nominee	Listed

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Requested move 29 July 2020

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: Moved. There's consensus for move. (non-admin closure) – Ammarpad (talk) 07:43, 9 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Bored (Billie Eilish song) → Bored (song) – Primary search topic for the term "Bored (song)". All the others song of the same title do not have an article The Ultimate Boss (talk) 07:18, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose - WP:INCDAB with respect to other songs listed at Bored (disambiguation). -- Netoholic @ 07:47, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose per Netoholic. Lugnuts ^{Fire Walk with Me} 06:46, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Support per nom. There is no other article that could reasonably use the title. Station1 (talk) 19:12, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Support as it is the only song with this name that has an article. A hatnote could be added to the top of the article to go to the other songs already listed in the disambiguation page. Aoba47 (talk) 20:45, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Support. We do not further disambiguate someone with (Russian politician) when a non-notable political candidate's name redirects to an election page, or (American chef) if a non-notable cooking show contestant redirects to the show's season. Likewise, further disambiguation when there are no notable songs by that name, just ones that redirect to their albums without significant discussion, is not helpful to readers searching the name.--Yaksar (let's chat) 01:39, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Support per WP:DABSONG since it's the only song by this name which has an article. Steel1943 (talk) 04:47, 5 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bored (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:11, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Might start this tonight if I have the time, or else the review will begin tomorrow --K. Peake 17:11, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good
"from the soundtrack 13 Reasons Why (A Netflix Original Series Soundtrack)." → "from the soundtrack album, 13 Reasons Why (A Netflix Original Series Soundtrack) (2017)."
Writing sentence should be the second of the para instead and follow it with production still
"The song was released by" → "It was released by"
Wikilink lead single
"Musically a mid-tempo" → "A mid-tempo" with the target
"the lyrics see Eilish" → "the song's lyrics see Eilish"
"received generally mixed reviews" → "has received generally mixed reviews"
"with many deeming it" → "with a number of them deeming it"
"The song has since been" → "The song has been"
"and Polish Society of the Phonographic Industry (ZPAV)." → "and Polish Society of the Phonographic Industry (ZPAV), respectively."
"An accompanying music video for "Bored" was" → "An accompanying music video was"
"In it, It shows Eilish dressed" → "In it, Eilish is shown dressed"
Target Nikes to Nike, Inc.
"hanging off a ladder that goes on" → "while hanging off a ladder that seemingly goes on"
Add a sentence about the video's critical reception
"promoted the song by" → "promoted "Bored" by"
"it during her" → "it for her"

Background and composition

Writing/production sentences should begin this section instead
"as the lead single for the album" → "as the lead single from" with the wikilink and remove target on the soundtrack
Where is digital download and streaming backed up; Tidal is only streaming? Either find a source that states this or add various citations for the release.
"by Billie Eilish, her brother" → "by Eilish alongside her brother"
"for 13 Reasons Why, and" → "for 13 Reasons Why and"
"as it opened her music" → "due to opening her music"
Target key to Key (music)
Wikilink tempo
Are you sure the stylization is correct for the range that Eilish's vocals span?
Identify music critics as music journalists here instead to prevent repetitive wording, though keep the target
"that makes Eilish feel contempt for an ex-boyfriend" → "that demonstrates Eilish feeling contempt for an ex-lover"

Reception

Can you get more than three reviews since at least four are needed to give a critical overview?
"has received mainly mixed reviews" → "has been met with mainly mixed reviews"
"saying it was" → "opining that it is"
"Writing for Insider, Courteney Larocca" → "For Insider, Courteney Larocca"
"the layering in Eilish's vocals" → "the layering of Eilish's vocals"
""Bored" has been" → "Commercially, "Bored" was" because this is a new para
"and Polish Society of the Phonographic Industry (ZPAV)." → "and Polish Society of the Phonographic Industry (ZPAV), respectively."

Promotion

Music video

Background and synopsis

"climbs up an endless latter." → "climbing up an endless latter in the music video." on the img text
Wikilink music video
"was released on Eilish's Youtube on" → "was released to Eilish's YouTube on" with the wikilink
"with the concept." → "with the concept for it."
"sees her climb and hang off" → "sees her climbing and hanging off"
"dressed in a blue track suit" → "while she is dressed in a blue tracksuit"
Target Nikes to Nike, Inc.
"then talked about the videos" → "also talked about the visual's
Target antigravity to Anti-gravity

Critical reception

"received positive reviews from critics." → "was met with positive reviews from critics."
"praised the visual, saying" → "praised the visual, saying:"
"And that she" → "She continued, commenting that Eilish"
"Writing for Idolator, Mike Wass described" → "For Idolator, Mike Wass described"
"described the music video as" → "labeled the music video as"

Live performances

Good

Credits and personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

Good

Certifications

Good

References

Copyvio score looks decent at 39.0%
Kudos on archiving all of these where possible!
Cite Idolator as work/website instead for ref 7
Literally only the above issue here, great job!

Final comments and verdict

On hold once the issues are fixed, though reach out if you are confused about any of the changes I requested to implement. --K. Peake 09:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for another review Kyle! I have address all of your requests! Lmk if anything else needs to be done. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 01:09, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Ultimate Boss ✓ Pass after a very nice job on the response from you, with me only having copyedited one word! --K. Peake 08:13, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]