Talk:Bicknell–Armington Lightning Splitter House/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:17, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
I feel horrible for the backlog here JAGUAR 22:17, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
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[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
- Link "gable" for accessibility
- I would also recommend expanding the lead slightly in order to summarise, but I'll turn a blind eye as I recognise information could be scarce in this subject matter
- "The house's "Lightning Splitter" design harkens to the superstitious belief that the sharp angled gable would deflect bolts of lightning" - is this claim in the source given?
- "The house is located on the southwest corner of Pawtucket Avenue and Willett Avenue (Rhode Island Route 103)" - personally I wouldn't use brackets for the road
- "were not listed in the National Register of Historic Places nomination serve to further enhance its importance" - 'serve'?
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Nice house! This article meets the GA criteria, although I think the lead is a tad short. Promoting JAGUAR 22:44, 30 October 2015 (UTC)