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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 10:05, 25 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Last paragraph under writing needs a source.
  • "the film's narcissistic villain whose goal it is to marry her." "it" seems redundant.
  • More to come as I read along.
  • "very "distant from contemporary pop", Ashman and Menken were initially very skeptical" Could one "very" be taken out?
  • "provided the voice of its titular character," Easter egg links should not be used, could you add the name?
  • "lost to the film's title and theme song" Easter egg link redundant here, since title of the other song was linked just before.
  • Nice, I think it is ready to pass! One last thing, I don't think the Belle character is linked in the article outside the lead, could this be done (no easter egg)? I'll pass after your next reply. FunkMonk (talk) 21:30, 25 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Passed then! FunkMonk (talk) 22:26, 25 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]