Talk:Baloise Session
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||
|
OTRS
[edit]The content of this article has been derived in whole or part from http://www.avo.ch. Permission has been received from the copyright holder to release this material. Evidence of this has been confirmed and stored by VRT volunteers, under ticket number 2008082510010887. This template is used by approved volunteers dealing with the Wikimedia volunteer response team system (VRTS) after receipt of a clear statement of permission at permissions-enwikimedia.org. Do not use this template to claim permission. |
If there are any questions, please let me know. ---J.S (T/C/WRE) 22:56, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
Improvements
[edit]The most screamingly obvious thing wrong with this article in the lack of references! All we need is three or four links to newspaper and similar reviews of the festival. You have dropped a dozen names of performers. We do not need to see evidence for every one but the links you provide should include the names of at least some of the performers.
Picture. Get de:Datei:Clubtischatmosphäre.jpg moved to the Commons or release another image. I assume the OTRS ticket above means you have released text - now release an image.
Capitalisation. Session should definitely be thus and not SESSION. I have no strong feelings about whether it should be AVO or Avo. (I was horrified to find that I am not allowed to view avo.com from the UK - I disapprove of smoking but I disapprove a lot more with having my browsing censored!) — RHaworth (Talk | contribs) 14:24, 21 January 2009 (UTC)