Talk:An Assisted Elopement (1910 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 08:32, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look into this one.

Here's what I found:

The film being lost is mentioned a second time in the Plot section; remove it and rewrite the first sentence as: "The Moving Picture World synopsis states:".
"The New York Dramatic Mirror review was positive despite having been a story already been done by another studio outside of the Edison Trust." Remove the second 'been'.
The Thanhouser refs should have the following: work=Thanhouser Films: An Encyclopedia and History.
The Newspapers.com refs should mention they come from that website and is open access.

This will be put on hold for you to handle the problems. DepressedPer (talk) 23:11, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@DepressedPer: - Thanks for the ping, fixes done. Not sure why the bot removes the notices and not others so quickly. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:23, 14 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Consider this a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 17:33, 14 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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