Talk:Skip Walker/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:09, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:54, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

per WP:COMMONNAME this article should be titled Skip Walker. That's what the majority of the sources use. I can go ahead and move it over the redirect once you approve. Done
- Moved. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:42, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
added asterisks to teams Done
- I believe they have been added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:46, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
added cats Done
- Thanks. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:42, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
link delvalle high school? Done
- Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:42, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
add high school to infobox Done
- Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:42, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
add all conference selections to infobox Done
- Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:23, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
no senior stats? Done
- Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:06, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
no college career totals? Done
- Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:06, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
link texas city texas Done
- Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:42, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"1141 yards" comma Done
- Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:42, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"first-team spot on the CFL All-Star team" remove first team because I don't believe there are first and second teams and in the 1983 section, you didn't say first ream: "earning a spot on the CFL All-Star team" Done
- Changed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:55, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
he was a CFL East all star in 80, 82 and 83 as well so add that to the body and infobox. See statscrew and the cfl seasons pages on wikipedia.
- Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:31, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - Hi @Gonzo fan2007: thanks for your help. CFL All Star and CFL East All Star are actually two different things. CFLEastAllStar is a different parameter in the infobox. (See Junior Ah You for an example) Walker was a CFL East All Star in 80, 82 and 83 and a CFL All Star in 82 and 83. I was suggesting to note all five of those selections in the lead and infobox. See 1982 CFL season, where he is listed twice. Thanks! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 00:15, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - WikiOriginal-9, fixed! Sorry don't know the CFL as well as the NFL. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 00:49, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
cfl career totals? Done
- Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:06, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
do you know where the height in the infobox is from. PFA has 5'9 Done
- Switched to 5'9". « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:46, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
those sources don't seem to say he died in austin Done
- The second source says Walker returned to the Austin area and opened a restaurant named Hoover’s. A celebration of life will be held next Friday, Apr. 22 from 4-7 pm at King-Tears Funeral Home in Austin. Services will be held next Saturday. Apr. 23 at 12 noon at Greater Mt. Zion Baptist Church in Austin.. I think this is enough to support the "death_place" field in the infobox being Austin. Let me know if you disagree. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:55, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - I'm just gonna be bold and remove it since the source doesn't specifically say that. Better safe than sorry. The body already says he returned to Austin. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:34, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Add his All-Star and CFL season leaders to the lead Done
- Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:23, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I'm gonna look for an image. Done
- Noted. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:46, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This diff added something but I reverted. Done
- Agree with revert. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:46, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:24, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 13:32, 9 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:01, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: You can mark any of the remaining GA nominations which I have not gotten to (that you've reviewed) as withdrawn for now ... too busy to get to any currently... and who knows... I might need them for next year's competition

Thanks, BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:04, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: Per WP:GAN/I#N3:

"Withdrawing: To withdraw a nomination before the review has begun, remove the GA nominee template from the article talk page. To withdraw a nomination after the review has begun, let the reviewer know; the reviewer will then fail the nomination."

Just confirming that you want me to fail these before I do it. You're going to get a bunch of talk page messages. :)

Thanks, ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:07, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11 and WikiOriginal-9:, are you opposed to me taking over this nomination? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:02, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Sure, you can take it if you like. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:00, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

WikiOriginal-9, I think I have addressed all your comments. Please let me know if you have any follow-up items. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:31, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Can you expand his sophomore and junior year stats and make them follow the same general format as the freshmen and senior years? (Example: 78 carries for 311 yards and three touchdowns) ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:19, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Gonzo fan2007: Also, besides the point above about his sophomore and junior year stats, the only thing left is the following: Could you include his CFL East All-Star selections in 1980, 1982 and 1983 in the body? They are in the lead but they should be in the body as well. Thanks! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:40, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- WikiOriginal-9, all done I believe. Let me know if there is anything else. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:58, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: and @Gonzo fan2007: All points have been addresssed. Passing the article. Congratulations BeanieFan11 and Gonzo fan2007! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:08, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.