Talk:Alesta/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 22:26, 26 December 2016 (UTC)

I don't typically write/review album articles, but I will give this a try.

Lead

• "website Cosmpolitan" - Cosmopolitan is actually an international magazine. Although this interview is published online, remove "website" and link Cosmopolitan (magazine) and italicize.

Background and Composition

• a Romanian music camp camp - remove duplicate word
• also being to mean --> also meaning
• version of the album sees --> version of the album show
• with further lettering appearing --> with lettering displayed
• were commercialized by --> featured
• "from other universes" - Not sure what this means. Either provide more context or consider removing
• Romanian website Cosmopolitan --> Cosmopolitan
• set to uptempo --> uptempo
• with some songs being as well performed in French, Romanian and Spanish --> with some songs performed in French, Romanian and Spanish as well

Promotion

• where she as well released --> where she also released
• Alesta benefited of a --> Alesta embarked on a
• last but one --> third and fourth
• a featuring with Romanian band Havana --> featuring Romanian band Havana

Other

• One link is dead
• No copyvio issues

That's all I got! TarkusAB 22:58, 26 December 2016 (UTC)

• @TarkusAB: All  Done, besides the "from other planets" thing from the "composition" section, as I think it's clear enough, though. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:16, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
  • Looks good, this one gets a pass. TarkusAB 13:01, 27 December 2016 (UTC)