Talk:Agent Carter season 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk ·02:50, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this for a review if that is okay with you. I have seen about half of the first season of this and I am really enjoying it (which is a lot since I am usually indifferent about comic book media). I will have my comments up soon. Aoba47 (talk) 02:50, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks Aoba. Myself or Adam will be sure to get to your comments once you add them. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:01, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Overall comments

Make sure to add an alt to the image in the infobox.
Put the years that Captain America: The First Avenger and the Agent Carter film were released.
I would recommend replacing the “,and” in the final sentence of the third paragraph of the “Lead” with a semicolon to prevent any ambiguity that the criticism of the season led to the show's cancellation.
In the “Development” subsection, add “for” between “allow” and “any” so it reads “this would probably not allow for any standalone episodes”.
Break up the sentence with the quotes from Atwell about diversity in the fourth paragraph of the “Writing” subsection. I would suggest starting a new sentence at “and saying”. The large quote overwhelms the sentence so it may help to separate into a new one.
Add the descriptive term “the films” in front of the list of films in the “Design” subsection for clarity. Same for the list in the “Filming” subsection.

Final comments

@Adamstom.97: @Favre1fan93: Great job with this article. I could not find much to improve actually so I apologize for the brief nature of my review. Let me know if you have any questions or comments about my review. Once you addressed all aspects of my review, I will review this page one last time and it should be a quick and easy pass. Aoba47 (talk) 04:33, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks again Aoba, I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. - adamstom97 (talk) 05:06, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  - Thank you for your quick response. Excellent work again on this article (and with the other Agent Carter articles as well). ✓ Pass Aoba47 (talk) 05:14, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    - Thanks Aoba47. If you were up to it and willing, we have Jessica Jones (season 1) waiting for a GA review and List of Marvel Cinematic Universe television series at FL, if you'd like to look either over for us. Thanks again. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 05:51, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
      - Thank you for the comment. I am currently pretty busy with school and work at the moment (I have a bad habit with procrastinating like crazy on here), but I am definitely interested in doing a review on Jessica Jones (season 1) sometime in the near future. It helps that I was already interested in the show in the first place. I will probably not be able to do it for a little bit if that is okay. Aoba47 (talk) 06:01, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
        No worries. Just letting you know. If it's still not done by the time you have the chance, that would be great. Thanks again. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 19:30, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]