Talk:Admiral-class battlecruiser/GA1
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 11:20, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- There's something wrong with the reference to the Mackensens; do you mean the Ersatz Yorcks? The Mackensens had 35cm guns, not 38s.
- That's what Brit Intelligence was reporting at the time; I've clarified it through a note.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good, but you might also want to mention that Germany was in fact building four Mackensens, not three. Parsecboy (talk) 11:26, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
- That's what Brit Intelligence was reporting at the time; I've clarified it through a note.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
- There's something wrong with the reference to the Mackensens; do you mean the Ersatz Yorcks? The Mackensens had 35cm guns, not 38s.
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- One other thing: the external link doesn't seem to be working. Other than that everything looks pretty good. Just fix the bit about the Mackensens/Ersatz Yorcks and this article will be ready for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 11:36, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
- Fixed the link.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:58, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
- One other thing: the external link doesn't seem to be working. Other than that everything looks pretty good. Just fix the bit about the Mackensens/Ersatz Yorcks and this article will be ready for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 11:36, 28 May 2010 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
