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Reviewer: Fearstreetsaga (talk · contribs) 01:39, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I like the article; it covers the topic well. Here are my suggestions:

Lead
Plot
  • "With the aid of one of Bob's cyborg henchmen, Spatz rescues Alexa, Bertram, and a Centurion before he sabotages the torus powering the coliseum." It is not clear who he is referring to here. Also, why does this individual want to sabotage the torus powering the coliseum?
References

There are a couple dead links that can be fixed:

  • Ref 4 (from Dustin Infinger)
  • Ref 15 (from New York Comic Con)
    • replaced link

Fearstreetsaga (talk) 01:39, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Fearstreetsaga: thanks for the review! I have addressed the concerns raised above. Please let me know if additional work is needed. Argento Surfer (talk) 12:54, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Argento Surfer: The changes look good. I left a comment about one of the links. Fearstreetsaga (talk) 21:54, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]