Talk:A Little Bit/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:08, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

• No dab links or dead ELs

Background and composition

• "A Little Bit" lasts for three minutes and forty-seven seconds. – is this really needed? If it is, reword to remove "lasts for" - colloquialish

 Done

• The sheet music analysis needs attribution ie 'According to blah..

 Done

Reception

• "But, Chuck Campbell..." 'but' → however

 Done

• Are there any more reviews? Look through all the reviews from the album on Metacritic

Album is not present in Metacritic. I searched everywhere.

• "The song debuted at number sixty-two in Australia" - on what?

 Done On ARIA Charts.

Music video

• A lot of this section is "The music video..." "the video..." Vary it a bit. Merge the two paragraphs.

 Done

• The synopsis needs a decent copy-edit in terms of prose quality

I'll ask someone to copy-edit.

 Done

• "The video reached number seven on Total Request Live countdown." the Total Request Live countdown?

 Done

Live performances and cover version

• "She wore a white top and plaid pants for the performance. She also put on a red hat, and a red tie" - merge

 Done

• You mention the poles twice

 Done Removed the duplicate.

• The cover should have its own level two section at the bottom of the article (just before refs), and needs expansion - particularly with reception

I have very few information on the cover. Will try to find out more.

 Done

Credits and personnel

• More wikifying, please

 Done

Summary

A good start, but a way to go. On hold, awaiting improvements. Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:20, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Further comments

• Link music video

 Done

• Source the concert synopsis

 Done

• The cover needs expansion, its own infobox, etc. as it was a single. See When You Believe and Love Don't Live Here Anymore for examples. It should be at the very end, after Simpson's track listing/charts.

 Done

• Trim File:ALittleBitSample.ogg to 22.7 seconds

 Done

• Because there is not much in the way of chartings, expand the current info to include the number of weeks etc.

 Done

Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:55, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

• I would suggest removing the two chart position tables as they give no new information and are a bit confusing. The cover needs more info, particularly critical reception, and also needs some basic info like release date/other info and director of video. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:29, 18 January 2011 (UTC)

Removed the tables. Novice7 | Talk 03:49, 19 January 2011 (UTC)

Added a review. But, couldn't find the director. Novice7 | Talk 11:27, 19 January 2011 (UTC)

The release date/label needs a reference, then I think we'll be done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:08, 19 January 2011 (UTC)

Added (allmusic). Novice7 | Talk 03:33, 20 January 2011 (UTC)

OK, passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:49, 20 January 2011 (UTC)