Talk:75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event/GA2

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Nominator: Pharaoh496 (talk · contribs) 19:14, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Images are appropriately tagged. What makes the following reliable sources?

moneycontrol.com -- I can't find an "About" page that would give me information about the site.
inshorts.com -- ditto.

I'll do spotchecks next, probably later today. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:39, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Spotchecks. Footnote numbers refer to this version.

FN 37 cites "Rohit Sharma and Shubman Gill opened India's account, adding 74 runs for the first wicket. After scoring his twenty-first run, Sharma became the sixth Indian to cross 17,000 runs in international cricket." Does not mention Gill or the first wicket partnership score.
FN 35 cites "... with Khawaja being dismissed short of a double hundred. As Green departed for 114, A late order partnership between Nathan Lyon and Todd Murphy saw Australia set a commanding total for 480 ...". I listened to this and I don't think Khawaja is mentioned, nor Green.
FN 36 cites "... with Ashwin taking the wickets of the remainder of the batters, bringing up his thirty-second five wicket haul in international cricket. He became not only the highest wicket taker for India in games against Australia, but also the highest wicket taker in the Border-Gavaskar Trophy ..." The source has "He also surpassed India legend Anil Kumble and became the bowler with the most 5-wicket haul in India with 26."
FN 43 cites "This was the second time that both of them had won this award. After the match, Kohli presented his signed jerseys to Khawaja and Carey as a symbol of friendship" The first part of this is not in the given source.

As the first four spotchecks all failed, I am going to stop here and fail this nomination. If/when you fix these and renominate, please note that there are some uncited sentences in the article that will need to be cited before it can pass GA -- some of the bullets under "Match summary", for example, and most of the paragraph starting "After the gallery visit", and some of the list in the "Attendance" section. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:26, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]