Talk:2020 EFL League One play-off final/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:52, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"clubs in EFL League One and League Two, the third and fourth tiers of the English football league system, voted to curtail the season, meaning the final table would be calculated by a points-per-game (PPG) method, with the play-offs being played between the clubs" - try to use a different word than clubs for a second time for variety
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"to determine the third promoted team.[7][2]" - refs in numerical order please
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"but Marcus Browne equalised minutes before half-time." - how many minutes exactly?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Fleetwood were reduced to nine men as Paddy Madden received his second yellow card," - what did Madden do to receive a second yellow card?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink the first mention of the term assist to Assist (association football)
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"having made the most passes during the season, while Wycombe's approach was more direct, having scored 24 times from set pieces throughout the season." - repetition of the word "season"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink behind closed doors to the relevant article
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Robinson made one change to his team from the second play-off semi-final, with Taylor replacing Jamie Mackie in Oxford's starting lineup, while Wycombe's 'team" - repetition of the word "team"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink volley, header and sliding tackle to the relevant articles
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Four minutes later, Wycombe took the lead:" - BBC Sport says it its 9 minutes at the top of the page while saying 10 in the live feed. Which is correct?
Nine. Corroborated with the Sky Sports report too.The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink substitutions, cross and free kick to the relevant articles
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Heavy rain began to fall" - when did it start raining?
It doesn't say when it started, just that it was reported to be heavy rain late in the second half. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"Jacobson, scorer of the winning goal reflected on his spot kick" - shouldn't there be a second comma after the word "goal"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reference 1 is missing the date it was published and the author
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am going to place the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 10:42, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 thanks once again, I think I addressed and/or responded to each of your comments. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:09, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]