Talk:2010 Crown Royal Presents the Heath Calhoun 400/GA2
GA Review
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Reviewer: Derild4921☼ 01:32, 18 August 2010 (UTC) Hello, this is my first GA review so please remind me if I do anything wrong. Thanks!
- Ok, looking at the page now, it passes the quick-fail criteria and I will now conduct a full review. Derild4921☼ 01:53, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
In depth review
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- a (prose):
- Only saw a typo NSD fixed
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- Free of OR, still checking rest
- Conditions were clear with a high of 88 °F (31 °C), making the track potentially slippery.[14] Where in ref 14 does it say the track would become potentially slippery. Minor issue, but I don't get the concept and I also couldn't find it in the reference. Besides this it's fine.
- (edit conflict)
Removed since it isn't stated by the source. ~NSD (✉ • ✐) 13:20, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)
- Also, according to this, ref 2 is dead. Any alternative?
- Didn't show up now. So I guess it was fixed. --Nascar1996 Contributions / Guestbook 13:18, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) That's because I replaced it. ~NSD (✉ • ✐) 13:20, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
- Didn't show up now. So I guess it was fixed. --Nascar1996 Contributions / Guestbook 13:18, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
- Ok, rest of the references look good so as soon as the lead is done I guess I can pass this. (A bit quick but I guess that's what happens with a well written article beforehand ;)) Derild4921☼ 13:31, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Looking at some of your other GA's this article is fine.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- No problem, free of POV
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No problem, editors working together fine.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- All are free use and there are enough in the article with captions
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Ok, after going through and having fixed up the minor issues I saw this article is now a GA! Derild4921☼ 13:44, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Miscellaneous
[edit]- The lead is a bit on the short side. Maybe add in a paragraph on the background section and practice. Derild4921☼ 13:14, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
- Compared to the other articles, such as 2010 Toyota/Save Mart 350, I will add a small race summary to the lead.--Nascar1996 Contributions / Guestbook 13:17, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
