Talk:2006 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 22:53, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, getting on with it:

"The other Formula Three series champions featured in the entry list was" champion, since there's only one more name listed.
"runner-up Roldán Rodríguez, Five Macanese drivers" This is two different sentences, so . not , .
"but the threat of rain never came" The threat of rain came, the actual rain did not, I presume? Needs a rephrase.
" and deranged his car's front-right suspension." Deranged? Or damaged?
"Conway thought about passing Tsukakoshi but decided not to." Thought about? Do we have a source for his thinking? I think you mean something similar but slightly different here.
IS willing a qualification race really an official F3 victory? Got a source that states that?
Rodolfo Ávila or Avila? Be consistent.
"on his first try at overtaking him for third during the twelfth lap and was successful." It's only his first try if he needed a second one...
"The attrition rate was low with five of the thirty-two entrants finishing the race" Are we missing a "not" here somewhere?

@Courcelles: Many thanks for the review. All of your suggestions have been put into the article. MWright96 (talk) 07:33, 13 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]