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Two incidents

Links: [1] [2] --DBig Xrayᗙ 12:20, 27 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Incorrect information

"It was related to the secessionist struggle in the Indian state of Punjab where Indian Hindu Government was coming hard on Sikh community . The Sikh hijackers wanted to bring Indian atrocities in Punjab in limelight."

The above paragraph has the following issues:

Neither India nor the State of Punjab ever had a "Hindu" Government at any point in time in Independent India. So the Indian Hindu Government is wrong. This should be corrected.
"..was coming hard on Sikh community" - This is extreme generalisation. It should, instead, be "..was coming hard on militant separatists"
"..wanted to bring Indian atrocities in Punjab in limelight." - The link in the reference cited for this sentence does not have any such thing as Indian atrocities in Punjab. This should be removed.

I will make the necessary edits after waiting for a week for any views on these points. __Chaduvari (talk) 16:49, 4 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]