Talk:1980 (album)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 17:12, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'm Kingsif, and I'll be doing this review. This is an automated message that helps keep the bot updating the nominated article's talkpage working and allows me to say hi. Feel free to reach out and, if you think the review has gone well, I have some open GA nominations that you could (but are under no obligation to) look at. Kingsif (talk) 17:12, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Sources look good, AGF on copyvio and OR bc tools are down; sources are reliable and quotes are correctly attributed
Infobox and cover good
One commons image - suitable
Could the quote box be made wider?
Other tables as standard
Lead a good length
History and talk show it's stable
Follows album MOS
Article title is a bit unwieldy, is it unable to just be 1980 (album)?
Is past in their past jazz-funk style supposed to be 'post'?
Sufficient lead
produced by them both sounds informal, could 'them' be removed, or some other phrasing used?
Ok, both past and custom modular synthesizers - I don't know what 'past' is doing here, if it means something special it needs a wikilink
In The title track voices, I know it's obvious but I think it should have "1980" included
Could there be a ref after 'computer technology' - end of sentence with quotes in
And again after 'uncertain decade'

Overall

on hold a few things. Kingsif (talk) 01:37, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, I revised all your prose and style concerns. I put in a request for the article to be moved to 1980 (album). isento (talk) 06:29, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Thanks, looks good! Kingsif (talk) 16:50, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]